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twenty seconds too late by ~idareyoutoforget:iconidareyoutoforget:





Yesterday I walked away
    waving my white flag
       and calling a truce between us.
I watched as the smile melted off your face
   and stained your shirt a funny shade of purple
  from the lipstick you always wore.
I guess I left it
twenty seconds too late to save you.
     before I knew it, you’d slipped away.
©2005-2009 ~idareyoutoforget
:iconidareyoutoforget:

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short piece
from the man's perspective
stock from [link]

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:iconsaturnsrevolution:
That's cool. I enjoy the smile melting.

--
If I should die tomorrow,
No tears would I shed,
For I've been alive forever,
Always wanting to be dead.
:iconinmyroom:
:(

hug.
come back to rgpprgppg
:iconidareyoutoforget:
cor cor I can't...
not now
I'd look stupid coming back.
*hug hug hug*

--
Live as if your were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever. -- Gandhi
:iconmadkatkiper:
short, it moves fast, and it's sweet. cool. imagery +100.

--
My subatomic particles are tingling.

Mad Kat Kiper

Member of The Shoe Crew.
:iconrandomoo:
Wowowow =O Short yet sharp. eep.

--
I'll be the waterwings that save you if you start drowning
in an open tab when your judgment's on the brink.
I'll be the phonograph that plays your favorite
albums back as you're lying there, drifting off to sleep.

the postal service is love.
:iconblackdragon311:
Wow.. short and yet amazing. You have a way with words hun. Awesome job. :)

--
I am the darkness still drifting through light. Forever shall I be consumed by the torment within.
Clubs: :iconTheWritersMeow:
:icononnerable:
Great piece.:hug:

--
Germaine Lamar♂♥♀

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